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测验履历:英语四级作文行文思绪3(责编推荐:数学辅导jxfudao.com/xuesheng)

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测验履历:英语四级作文行文思绪

  Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write A Letter Applying for a Bank Loan. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:

  1)简朴先容小我私人环境

  2)声名申请助学贷款的缘故起因、数额

  3)担保会公道操作贷款并表白还款的刻意

  A Letter Applying for a Bank Loan

  行文思绪

  本题属于景象式命题,要求写一封申请信。按照所给提要,本文应包括如下内容:简朴先容本身的环境,表白写信目标:申请助学贷款;声名申请助学贷款的缘故起因、数额;担保公道操作贷款并表白还款刻意,最后暗示感激。

  高分范文

  A Letter Applying for a Bank Loan

  Sep 12th, 2008

  To whom it may concern,

  I am a freshman of Lianhe University, [1]majoring in Applied Physics. I am writing in the hope that I may obtain a bank loan to support my study in Applied Physics for the following four years.

  My parents are both laid-off workers, so it’s [2]beyond their power to finance me through the college education. [3]To make matters worse, my mother has suddenly fallen ill and is expecting a major operation. [4]Therefore, [5]with the college tuition becoming a much heavier burden on my family, I am compelled to apply a RMB20,000 bank loan.

  [6]I give you my promise that the loan would be used properly. [4]Meanwhile, I’ll [7]spare no effort to work hard both in the study and my future career in order to pay back the loan. I would be greatly obliged if my application is granted. And I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

  Sincerely yours,

  Song Xue

  【亮点点评】

  [1]“主修…”,高中数学,此刻分词奉陪伴状语。

  [2]“超出…的手段范畴”。

  [3]“使工作更糟糕的是”。

  [4]过渡跟尾词语,初中数学 ,使文章层次清楚、跟尾细密。

  [5]“with+宾语+宾补”的独立布局。

  [6]“我担保…”,that引导同位语从句。

  [7]“精心极力”。

  佳句临摩

  1.佳句:To make matters worse, my mother has suddenly fallen ill and is expecting a major operation.

  临摩:令人更疑惑不解的是,许多飞机都从大海上怪僻消散了。

  2.佳句:Therefore, the college tuition becoming a much heavier burden on my family, I am compelled to apply a RMB20,000 bank loan.

  临摩:因为周围交通未便利,人们只得步行回家。

  3.佳句:Meanwhile, I’ll spare no effort to work hard both in the study and my future career in order to pay back the loan.

  临摩:世界人民都精心极力地支持北京举行奥运会1.练好口语,趁便测验拿高分....这是李阳先生的名言。


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